Monday, February 24, 2014
#3
I decided to go with paper #3, because from the first sentence in essay you were able to grasp my attention. For some people it might be harder to get into to though , being that they don't take an interest from the beginning due to finding it boring. I like how you tied in parts from the book, but in some cases it was like you were telling the book. I'm not sure if you were trying to let them get the visual or not , but for future reference , that could be something to keep an eye out for. It was also good to see citation of the book and also the fact that after a quotation , you went into more details about the quote which gave the reader better background. I like that you were able to capture my attention so it was a winner.
letter to nate
Dear Nate,
I have this book that my class was assigned to read an I believe you will find it interesting. This book "The Absolutely true diary of a part-time Indian" by Sherman Alexie it allows you to see that there is positive outlets in life, when you feel like the world is against you. Yeah, all this may seem a little boring but its really worth the read. We can even make this interesting. If you finish the book and get something back from it , ill do whatever you say for a week. Deal? Without a doubt I think you learn something from this whether its how to get over your fears or how to get a girl , or even to never judge a book by its cover.
In the book Junior the main character loses his sister. I know you just recently lost your brother and I know you took it hard. The way Junior dealt with things was through his drawings. I think you could have took all your energy/ built up angry and went to where you are the happiest, the football field. Junior also has a best friend that is like the known bully on the rez. They reminded me of you and your best friend so much. All the funny stories you would tell me about you guys. I just knew I had to get you to read the book.
P.S : If it makes it more interesting its banned because of the harsh language and masturbating.
I have this book that my class was assigned to read an I believe you will find it interesting. This book "The Absolutely true diary of a part-time Indian" by Sherman Alexie it allows you to see that there is positive outlets in life, when you feel like the world is against you. Yeah, all this may seem a little boring but its really worth the read. We can even make this interesting. If you finish the book and get something back from it , ill do whatever you say for a week. Deal? Without a doubt I think you learn something from this whether its how to get over your fears or how to get a girl , or even to never judge a book by its cover.
In the book Junior the main character loses his sister. I know you just recently lost your brother and I know you took it hard. The way Junior dealt with things was through his drawings. I think you could have took all your energy/ built up angry and went to where you are the happiest, the football field. Junior also has a best friend that is like the known bully on the rez. They reminded me of you and your best friend so much. All the funny stories you would tell me about you guys. I just knew I had to get you to read the book.
P.S : If it makes it more interesting its banned because of the harsh language and masturbating.
Sunday, February 2, 2014
Obama speech
http://m.nydailynews.com/1.1594893#bmb=1
http://www.usatoday.com/picture-gallery/news/politics/onpolitics/2014/01/28/president-obamas-2014-state-of-the-union-address/4982709/
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