#3

I decided to go with paper #3, because from the first sentence in essay you were able to grasp my attention. For some people it might be harder to get into to though , being that they don't take an interest from the beginning due to finding it boring. I like how you tied in parts from the book, but in some cases it was like you were telling the book. I'm not sure if you were trying to let them get the visual or not , but for future reference , that could be something to keep an eye out for. It was also good to see citation of the book and also the fact that after a quotation , you went into more details about the quote which gave the reader better background. I like that you were able to capture my attention so it was a winner.